
I like it because of many reasons, the firt one is that the group on the picture was particularly difficult to working with the last year, we had a lot of troubles during the year, but then in the summer, it was as it was all right, like if we had have an intense year, with a lot of advances, so, despite it wasn't like that during the year, in the summer they make incredible advances, they show us they care about the group, that they had a commitment and principally, that they wanted to live the service, that is essencial on this scout unit. The most important thing on Intichinkay is to belive in freedom, frienship, commitment and humility, and to apply this to the community life, and serving inside the community and outside of it, trust in the reciprocity.
The second reason why I like it is because we were doing and amazing job in Calen, it was a really small town, with like 50 people, and despites it wasn’t what we were expecting (we only work with like 10 kids, and we were waiting like 40) it was a great experience.
Very good, Trini.
ResponderEliminarJust some comments.
"Children" is plural, so you say, "APPEAR". Also after a preposition use a verb in -ing.- "For DEVELOPING.... ".
This should be, " it was (like) AS it was all right, like if we had have an intense year, with a lot of advances, so, despite(s) it wasn't like that during the year,..."
"The second reason (because) WHY I like it is ..."
Additionally the preposition for CARE IS "FOR".
The verb is "Expecting".
2 POINTS.
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